Hello, I need an essay proofread and reworded for an argumentative essay based around perceptual realism and how realism can be achieved using digital effects in a film.

My argument is that VFX can be used to produce perceptually realistic worlds using digital or practical FX.

I will upload everything from an essay brief, my essay, plan and the question I am trying to get my argument across. I’m also going send notes that I got personally from my lecturer on how to make my essay pass.

The word limit is a 2000 word limit with a 25% leeway either way so make sure it’s around that limit.

Thanks.