This revision proposal is meant to help you craft a focused, purposeful approach to this revision, with the help of a classmate. The Revision Proposal will be a typed two-page, double-spaced reflection on the commentary you received on the paper of your choice (paying particular attention to marginal comments), and a clearly articulated revision plan that discusses the specific changes you will make in this revision. You are required to use direct quotes from my commentary, and explain how you will address these issues or concerns in this revision.